How to Communicate via E-mail
The Perils of Landing Page Limbo
November 2006 By Denny HatchIn the News
BTL MonthlyPersonal letter from the CEO of Titan Holdings (TTGL) as they anticipate higher profit margins … Thu Nov 02, 2006 23k
—From Denny Hatch’s Yahoo Inbox, Nov. 3, 2006
But the following subject line intrigued me: “Personal letter from the CEO of Titan Holdings (TTGL) as they anticipate …”
I can’t recall ever receiving a personal letter from a CEO. My ego was stroked.
Even though I’d never heard of Titan Holdings—and knowing it was most probably Spam—I clicked on it to see this “personal letter.”
There was nothing personal about it.
And therein lies the problem with e-mail and e-commerce.
Remembering the Dot-com Boom
In 1999, a serial entrepreneur named Jay Walker had just taken his priceline.com public, and was honored as Direct Marketer of the Year at the Direct Marketing Days New York conference at the Hilton. The acceptance speech was a stem-winder. In the words of Direct’s Thom Weidlich:
Walker envisioned a tomorrow where so many things Direct Marketers are used to paying massively for—postage, paper, printing, lettershop services, toll-free calls—will be free because they will be taken care of on the Internet. In addition, direct marketers will hold no inventory, and pre-press costs will drop 90% (and the work will take 15 minutes), Walker predicted.
Walker’s message wasn’t happy news for printers, paper and envelope salesmen, list owners and proprietors of lettershops—all of whom paid handsomely to attend the luncheon. At the conclusion of Walker’s talk, all of us in the audience were ready to slash our collective wrists.
Fast forward to Nov. 2, 2006. In a New York Times story titled “Junk Mail Is Alive and Growing,” Louise Story reported that last year, marketers sent more than 114 billion direct mailings—catalogs, envelope efforts, self-mailers and postcards—a 15 percent increase over five years ago.
And most of the dot-com prodigies from 1998-2000 are in another line of work.
What Happened?
When the Internet began to take off, the techie twenty-somethings that reigned supreme called it “a new paradigm”—a new medium that required new rules. Actually, they operated without rules.
When a marketer undertakes a direct mail campaign, the cost will run roughly $500 to $750 per thousand—or 50 cents to 75 cents apiece. As a result, direct mailers are disciplined and very careful. They know the rules and follow them slavishly. When rules are broken, they know precisely what rules they are breaking and why. Otherwise, they will lose a lot of money quickly.
Takeaway Points to Consider:
* In planning an e-mail campaign, decide precisely what action you want from the recipients, get inside their heads and figure out the information that they will need to respond. Don’t give them too much. “Confuse ‘em, ya lose ‘em,” said guru consultant Paul Goldberg.* For your e-mail to get opened, the subject line is everything.
* A letter is different from a brochure is different from an order mechanism is different from a lift note. This is true in e-commerce as well as direct mail. If everything looks alike, the power of your words is lost in the dreary sameness of it all.
* Design is the stage setting for your words. Words sell. Design doesn’t. Don’t allow the designer to dominate.
* Don’t automatically include a Web site on a mailing piece or off-the-page advertisement. Rather, test it with and without. The reason: If you’ve made a persuasive argument and the prospects are about to respond, they will be distracted by a URL. Their concentration will be broken and they will think, “Ah, maybe I should look at the Web site first.” Whereupon the mailing or ad is laid aside and you have lost the response.
* “Make it easy to order,” said Elsworth Howell, founder of Grolier Enterprises. If your mailing piece or ad sends responders to a Web site, create a special URL that takes them to a page directly relating to the message that they have just seen. Many marketers simply list the generic homepage, whereupon responders are consigned to roaming around Landing Page Limbo, and you have lost the order, donation or inquiry.
* When was the last time you took a critical look at your home page/landing page? Does that dog hunt? Or has it been screwed around with by so many people that it has become Landing Page Limbo?
Web Sites Related to Today's Edition:
The Text (not the Design) of the Titan “Personal Letter” E-mailhttp://tinyurl.com/y5bzev/
Titan Global Holdings
http://www.titanglobalholdings.com/



