Denny's Zinger: I Tried Direct Marketing and It Didn’t Work!
I am continually astonished at the number of people who throw money away on direct marketing projects and then whine that they did not work.
A case in point: a free-standing insert (FSI) from University of South Carolina.
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This single sheet printed front-and-back in full color depicts good-looking young people in an academic setting.
It arrived in my Sunday New York Times and broke every rule.
- Peggy and I are 69 and 79, respectively. No kids. No grandkids. We are the wrong people to spend money on reaching.
- No offer.
- No way to respond or request information:
-No phone number.
-No website address.
-No individual with an E-mail address.
- All copy is unreadable—white mouse-type reversed out against a maroon background.
- The copywriter—and smug university administrators—certainly suffered torn rotator cuffs pounding themselves on the back.
Takeaways to Consider
- With no offer and no way for the reader to respond, you'll never know whether your ad, mailing, FSI or digital effort was actually delivered or seen by anyone.
- I urge everybody—EVERYBODY IN MARKETING—to CLICK HERE and download FREE:
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- Otherwise, creating ads like this University of South Carolina FSI is like peeing in blue serge. It makes you feel warm all over and nobody notices.
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