Famous Last Words: Dismal e-Pitches
As a columnist for this publication and creator of the e-zine BusinessCommon Sense.com, I constantly receive e-pitches from PR types to do stories about some CEO or company, or e-sales pitches to buy something.
Hey, I'm available. If someone has something that will make my life easier in terms of a good product or service to buy—or an interesting interview that could make for a good story—I want to know about it.
"Always see a salesman once," said my first boss in the business, children's book publisher Franklin Watts.
Alas, I get assaulted by folks who have never learned the basic rules of marketing. Here are three ledes:
#1: Hi—I noticed you're not yet a subscriber to CableFAX Daily so I'm writing about a special offer for you. You can save on a subscription to the Daily and benefit from critical inside knowledge on today's cable market. For a limited time, you can subscribe to CableFAX Daily for just $895—that's $300 off the regular rate.
The writer got one thing right: I am not a subscriber to CableFAX Daily. However, something is very wrong: I have no intention of ponying up $895 for a service I have never heard of and have no idea what it's about. What are the benefits? Saving $300 is not a benefit, and that's no offer. Send me two weeks free (no risk, no obligation), get me dependent on the product and then hit me up for the $895. Never start off talking price unless the product is a household name (e.g., "A Full Year of TIME—52 issues—for just $9.95). "The right offer should be so attractive," said 1920s advertising guru Claude Hopkins, "that only a lunatic would say no."
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