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Denny Hatch's Blog

Denny Hatch's Blog

By Denny Hatch

About Denny

Author, direct marketing guru, and always entertaining Denny Hatch focuses on a major story in the news and shows how businesses can take advantage of–or avoid the pitfalls from–the lessons to be learned in terms of marketing, sales, PR and communications.

 

Making Social Sell

Jeff Molander
A Lie That Keeps You From Success (Part 1 of 3)
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"It is easier for the world to accept a simple lie than a complex truth." The words of 19th centrury...



Direct Mail for the Modern Marketer

Summer Gould
When Is EDDM Right for You?
Oct 30, 2014

EDDM (every door direct mail) has gained in popularity. EDDM, as defined by the USPS, is designed to help you...



Reinventing Direct

Gary Hennerberg
5 Tips to Sell Media Multitaskers
Oct 29, 2014

How many gadgets do you juggle simultaneously? Assuming you're like most people, you're on your laptop/tablet, smartphone and other media...



Keeping Search Profitable

Amanda G. Watlington, Ph.D.
Giving Organic Search Credit
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For many marketers, the end of the year marks the end of their budget cycle. It is certainly not revealed...



Marketing Sustainably

Chet Dalzell
San Diego Dreamin' - Charging Through 'The DMA'
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The last time the Direct Marketing Association held its annual conference in San Diego, it was 2009, we were all...



The Power Punch

Carolyn Goodman
Hottest 2014 Marketing Tip for Small Business? Put Aside a Budget!
Oct 24, 2014

Over 50 percent of the working population (120 million) work in a small business, and that trend is growing. According...



Here's What Counts

Chuck McLeester
Don’t Get Lost in a Maze of Metrics
Oct 23, 2014

There's a lot of data out there. More than any one marketer needs at any one time. The new frontier...



The Integrated Email

Cyndie Shaffstall
Focus Group of One
Oct 22, 2014

If you're sending your marketing campaigns without benefit of A/B or multi-variant testing—most companies admit to fewer than five tests...



Muscle Marketing

Wendy Montes de Oca
A Few of My Thoughts on SEO
Oct 21, 2014

This is going to be a short post. First, a caveat: No one SEO tactic is the end-all be-all, in...



Mobile-First Marketing

Greg Hoy
Mobile Advertising Isn't Just for Big Brands Anymore
Oct 20, 2014

The increasing use of mobile devices, mobile Web, multiple advertising platforms and the advancement of network technologies creates new opportunities...



Ruthless B-to-B Marketing

Ruth P.  Stevens
6 Great Blogs for B-to-B Marketers
Oct 15, 2014

In our fast-changing marketing world, a smart B-to-B practitioner keeps up to date by learning from thought leaders. While this...



Big Data, Small Data, Clean Data, Messy Data

Stephen  H. Yu
Missing Data Can Be Meaningful
Oct 9, 2014

No matter how big the Big Data gets, we will never know everything about everything. Well, according to the super-duper...



Marketing Nuggets

Michael Lowenstein
Marketing Success Is (Almost) All About the Data: Optimizing Customer Loyalty Behavior Initiatives
Oct 7, 2014

Much of what I've learned over the years about sales, marketing and customer service has to do with the critical...



Brand Matters

Andrea Syverson
Is It Time for a True Goodbye?
Sep 16, 2014

As I reflected on a client interaction I had this week, I thought about how helpful it is for organizations...



Triple Venti Dolce Data...

Vince Pickett
Clue Me In, Please
Aug 21, 2013

So here we are, halfway through 2013. You, along with everyone, are still trying to find that magic formula to...



Who's Your Data?

Rio Longacre
Instagram: Does It Matter That It Will Make Money on Your Pics?
Dec 19, 2012

Instagram announced the company will soon begin using your content to sell targeted advertising products to the highest bidder. Does...



SEO & Content Marketing Revue

Heather Lloyd-Martin
5 Tips for Top Positioning (And Converting) Page Titles
Aug 11, 2010

Wondering about a SEO content strategy that offers the biggest impact in the shortest time? Try tweaking your page titles....



Yblog

Yory Wurmser
Privacy in the Age of Big Data
Jul 10, 2013

Consumers reveal more than ever before consciously through social media and, just as importantly, unconsciously through their behaviors. This data...



The Whole Magilla

Ken Magill
What Marketers Can Learn From Maine's Political Email Idiocy
Feb 24, 2012

It finally happened. Politicians' idiotic email practices had a measurable negative effect. "Maine Republican Party chairman Charlie Webster has admitted...



Online Video Marketing Deep Dive

Eve Grey
Are Your Videos Champions of Your Brand?
Feb 3, 2014

If you advertise in an ordinary way, it's safe to expect ordinary results. However, when you take the extreme and...



Think Mobility

Greg Hickman
‘I Can't Because, I Need ... ’
Oct 7, 2013

Does this sound like you? Have you ever set up a goal, but then realized (either quickly or too late)...



Two Words That Wrecked an Otherwise Superb e-Sales Pitch

 
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[NOTE: All names and numbers have been changed to protect the inept.]

"Always see a salesman once," said my first boss and mentor, children's book publisher (and ace salesman) Franklin Watts.

The reason is obvious: you never know when (1) the guy has something to make you rich or (2) he is so good that you should hire him.

During 50 years in business, I have been receptive to reasonable blandishments from strangers by phone, letter, in person and—in recent years—e-mail.

James O'Malley called me and said that during this recession, many companies were having trouble getting paid. He said that his firm was employed by a number of direct marketing companies to collect overdue receivables and asked if I could use his services.

I gave him my usual line, "I'm a 'see' guy, not a 'hear' guy. Could you e-mail me some information?"

O'Malley said he would. Did I have any outstanding receivables currently that would require his services? I said that I did not, but who knows what the future would bring.

Five minutes later I received the following e-mail from James O'Malley:

your new Legal & Collection firm

Wednesday, July 1, 2009 11:02 AM

From:

"James O'Malley" <jomalley@b-s-minc.com>

To: dennyhatch@yahoo.com

Message contains attachments

BSM 2009 EMAIL Packet (James O'Malley) PC.doc (42KB)

Denny,

We spoke today about protecting your company on current and future collection issues. Our collection ratios are more than double those of in house attempts, OR competing attorneys and collection firms, and many times we can collect within 3-5 business days. Attached please find the information you requested regarding our firm, along with a placement form.

Please get together the exact amount, invoice number, and date of invoices as soon as possible.

We are excited about the opportunity to help dramatically increase your cash flow. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me at the number below.

 <see attachments>

Sincerely,

James O'Malley
Client Services Manager
800.555.8020
602.555.8041

www.b-s-minc.com

So far so good, I thought, as I clicked on the attachment. I believed James O'Malley cared about me, wanted my business and spent serious time trying to woo me. After all, he called and asked for me by name and immediately followed up with a personalized e-mail. This was a thoroughgoing professional sales effort that made me feel important.

"It's a basic tenet of selling," wrote the late copy guru Bill Jayme, "that in the marketplace as in theater, there is indeed a factor at work called 'the willing suspension of disbelief.'"

The attachment—which arrived in Word—was three pages. The first page was a memo from James O'Malley describing the history of his company and why I should use his services. Page two was a description of precisely what services O'Malley's firm could provide. And the third page was a form for me to fill out to get the ball rolling.

Alas, the first page was NOT a personal memo to me from James O'Malley. Here is how it read:

To: Potential Client

From: James O'Malley

As mentioned, the attachment was in Word format, which means he could have spent an additional two seconds replacing "Potential Client" with "Denny Hatch" and closed the loop, making me believe that he was talking exclusively and personally to me.

Instead of a highly professional personal message, O'Malley threw an e-pie in my face, saying in effect, "Yeah, I'm sending this to a lot of people. You're a big boy. You understand."

In short, he broke the spell and triggered what Hemingway called my "shockproof, built-in shit detector."

In addition, the following two sentences in the memo are grammatically incorrect:

 >>Our combined 75 years of experience, professionalism and dedication to our clients, allows us to exceed all industry standards and provide you with the most expeditious results. <<

(The verbs—"allows" and "provide"—should agree.)

>>By utilizing our vast resources, as well as our investigating techniques to determine the debtor's financial condition, provides us the information needed to best collect the account. <<

(The first word should be deleted.)

Admittedly, these are small details, but they indicate sloppy preparation. Would I trust these careless people to be in direct contact with my customers and clients—those folks who hopefully will be paying their bills on time once this damned recession is over and long after O'Malley's services are no longer required?

Uh-uh.

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