George Duncan
Always include in ads—and press releases—an offer other than “more information.” Items you offer through space or mail should be of intrinsic value, tangible and care-fully targeted to the status of the recipient.
Bill Christensen
Create substance where there once was none. Instead of asking the prospect to send for more free information … (no substance, too vague) I’ll have him “send for information packet No. 17.” (The word “packet” automatically denotes tangible substance … and adding “No. 17” implies the existence of an established … information bureau.)
Maxwell Sackheim
Give the reader a chance to make a deal with you—not tomorrow or next week, but right away.
Claude Hopkins
“The right offer should be so attractive that only a lunatic would say ‘no.’”
Axel Andersson
If you want to dramatically increase your results, dramatically improve your offer.
Denny Hatch is a freelance direct marketing consultant and copywriter. Visit him at www.dennyhatch.com, or contact him via e-mail at dennyhatch@aol.com.
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